The Wand and the Sword

This is the first page of the comic.  It was completed on January 28, 2010.

So . . . here you go . . . the first page of my comic. For those of you who’ve actually read my story . . . you’re not going to recognize these first three pages. My editor and I went through some changes in order to make it a) less like Shok’Artel is “monologuing” and b) easier for the poor artist (me) to draw

Dun dun dun . . . poor Nik didn’t get away like he thought

Okay . . . there’s a lot of things I’m going to change and things I need to improve on . . . but I’m calling this whole thing a learning process. I’m hoping as things progress, I will improve

That said . . . feel free to make comments about what I might need to change or what I actually got right (that might make the comments shorter )